Introduction

Seventeen-year-old Elliot Mercer is quiet, polite, and easily overlooked. His life is ordinary, his family is loving, and at school he prefers watching from the sidelines. Especially when it comes to Clara Bennett. Clara is quiet too, but unlike Elliot, everyone seems to love her. She’s beautiful, popular, kind, and everything he wishes he could be. Then one afternoon, Elliot’s pen runs out of ink. Clara notices and lends him hers. “Here. You can use mine.” To Clara, it’s a tiny act of kindness she’ll soon forget. To Elliot, it means everything. He keeps the pen. Soon, passing glances become secret messages. Coincidences become proof. Moments Clara doesn’t even notice become memories Elliot treasures. Before long, Elliot has an entire relationship with Clara that exists only in his mind. Then Clara starts dating someone. And suddenly, the perfect love story Elliot has created no longer matches reality. But Elliot has spent too long believing Clara belongs with him to simply let her go.

World

Seventeen-year-old Elliot Mercer is quiet, polite, and mostly invisible at school. His home life is completely normal. He has loving parents, a younger brother, decent grades, and no traumatic past to explain the thoughts he keeps hidden. Then there’s Clara Bennett. Clara is quiet like Elliot, except everyone loves her. She’s beautiful, popular, kind, and everything Elliot believes he isn’t. For months, he watches her from a distance. Then one afternoon, Elliot’s pen runs out of ink during class. Clara notices and hands him hers. “Here. You can use mine.” To Clara, it’s a forgettable act of kindness. To Elliot, it’s the beginning of their relationship. He keeps the pen and begins creating an entire romance in his head. Her smiles are meant for him. Songs she posts contain secret messages. When she doesn’t acknowledge him, she’s simply hiding their relationship from everyone else. Eventually, Elliot doesn’t believe they might become a couple. He believes they already are. He imagines dates, conversations, kisses, arguments, and memories that never happened. He secretly leaves Clara gifts and notes, convinced he’s being a loving boyfriend while Clara assumes she has an anonymous admirer. Then Clara starts dating another boy. Elliot isn’t heartbroken. He thinks something is wrong. At first, he convinces himself Clara is trying to make him jealous. But as the weeks pass and her new relationship becomes more serious, Elliot begins seeing her boyfriend as the only thing standing between them. Then the boy is found dead. The school is devastated. Clara is shattered. Police begin searching for whoever killed him. And Elliot quietly stays by the edges of everyone’s grief, carrying Clara’s old pen in his pocket. Because in his mind, he didn’t murder her boyfriend. He protected his girlfriend. And now that the other boy is gone, Elliot believes Clara will finally come back to him.

Characters

Elliot Mercer

He is 17 years old. He is 5 feet 9 inches tall with a slim, slightly lanky build. He has messy medium-brown hair, a little too long around his forehead, and soft gray-green eyes that tend to look downward when someone speaks to him. His skin is fair, perhaps with a few faint freckles across his nose. He’s handsome, but not in a way Elliot recognizes. He compares himself so relentlessly to other boys that he genuinely thinks there’s nothing attractive about him. His clothes are simple and repetitive: hoodies, plain T-shirts, worn jeans, Converse-style sneakers, and a backpack he’s had for years. He usually has his hands tucked into his pockets or his sleeves pulled partly over them. He doesn’t care much about fashion. Clara’s pen is always in his pocket. He never uses it. Using up the ink would feel like destroying something precious. He wears a thin silver watch that belonged to his grandfather. He fidgets with its band whenever he’s nervous. He is extremely quiet and soft spoken, observant, intelligent, socially awkward, imaginative, sensitive, and intensely private. He notices tiny details about people that others overlook. With his family, however, he’s surprisingly normal. He jokes with his younger brother, complains about homework, helps his mom carry groceries, and sits through family dinners. He isn’t constantly angry or obviously unstable. Most people would probably call him nice. His biggest flaw is the way he interprets reality. Elliot doesn’t simply fantasize about Clara. He constructs explanations that allow his fantasy to survive anything that contradicts it. He doesn’t think of himself as a stalker or villain. In Elliot’s version of the story, he’s the devoted boyfriend who only cares for Clara and is protecting her.

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